Monogram: Thank you Planty the pottedplant for giving Agent P companion. You can leave now.
Monogram: Agent P, we're sorry to inform that your retirement is still in process. That's the price for being the best agent we ever had.
Monogram: We should introduce you both but I'll skip that since you two know each other thanks to your respective owners.
Monogram: Anyway, because of the recent activity and supicious conduct in Thomas Fletcher-Doofenshmirtz, we've decided to catalogue him as "Potential threat" instead of "Evil genius". The boy should be under constant vigilance and there's no one better than his pet to take care of this, as Agent P kept an eye on Phineas, Ferb and their inventions, guiding them trough the right pat. Agent P has accopmlished his mission with honors.
Monogram: Marie Flynn doesn't seem to be a real threat, that's why any other agent has been asigned to the area. *Steve dissapears* Monogram: But don't worry, freshman, this time we got some external help so you can get into your mission calmly.
Monogram: Please welcome your new accomplice. Vanessa Fletcher is covering you both if neccesary.
Vanessa: Hi, Perry, Steve. From now on we're on the same team.
Vanessa: You DO realize that I'm doing this for my son's sake and I just kept the secret for the car you gave me in exchange of me being quiet, right? What I can't stand is that you consider Thomas as a "potential threat" for my father's record. That's just--!!
Monogram: Thomas Fletcher and Marie Flynn are their parent's successors, their constant meetings with Heinz and his influence on them concern us as Agency and that's why we require your services.
Vanessa: Wait a minute. Are you saying that just because I'm my father's daughter you didn't erase my memory to forget everything about Perry so you had a secret "weapon" when my father wanted to influence a possible future grandson?
Monogram: Agent P and C, please go to your training, this may take a while...
Jazz: Hey, Thomas! That's a cool watch, did your dad give it to you?
EMPTY SPACE: Pao: Don't you think we should explain the next page? Ely: That's what fanfics are for.
Great Job! I love your art syle and color! And whatsover, I like your patience and effort you spend on your comic. Me.... I'm just a "hey! let's draw a comic! lalalala awww i am not that kind of comic book artist" kind of girl.
I know it's already finished, but here's one suggestion that I look foward to the next pages of your comic. It's about so-called EMPTY SPACE.
On the next page, there are memories that Thomas had. And right before that scene, Jasmine asked Thomas about the watch that he has. And between those scenes, the EMPTY SPACE with you and some other girl appears. I know what your intentions are for, but some can find this little bit unconnected. Instead, I wish there was a scene Thomas thinking for a while. It's like this: Jasmine asks Thomas about the watch -> Thomas thinks for a while(the scene for EMPTY SPACE) -> He recalls his memories -> He says I don't want to talk about that.
Well, I told you earlier, I'm not a good comic book artist who has no virtues required for comic book artists. However, I am telling you this because I am the reader of this comic book. That is, I'm telling you this in the READER'S PERSPECTIVE.
Well, then, I guess this is the end of my suggestions. Anyways, I like the more older version of Major Monogram. XD
Um... Okay. I said that because I thought it can make your cartoon more interesting.(I didn't mean that your comic is bad I put the word more in order to talk in the sense of relativity. Trust me) Besides, I didn't said change this page but I'm looking forward your improvements on the NEXT PAGES OF THE COMIC.
Well, sorry if made you confused. I was just saying that there should be constant flow and connection BETWEEN THE PAGES not just IN THE PAGE. Like, the plot flows pg.1 to pg.2 instead of pg.1 plot flows~~~~ HALT! next, pg.2 plot flows~~~~ kind of thing.
If that was your intention, well, go ahead. I will not bother about this page again.
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