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I love your art syle and color!
And whatsover, I like your patience and effort you spend on your comic. Me.... I'm just a "hey! let's draw a comic! lalalala awww i am not that kind of comic book artist" kind of girl.
I know it's already finished, but here's one suggestion that I look foward to the next pages of your comic. It's about so-called EMPTY SPACE.
On the next page, there are memories that Thomas had. And right before that scene, Jasmine asked Thomas about the watch that he has. And between those scenes, the EMPTY SPACE with you and some other girl appears. I know what your intentions are for, but some can find this little bit unconnected. Instead, I wish there was a scene Thomas thinking for a while. It's like this: Jasmine asks Thomas about the watch -> Thomas thinks for a while(the scene for EMPTY SPACE) -> He recalls his memories -> He says I don't want to talk about that.
Well, I told you earlier, I'm not a good comic book artist who has no virtues required for comic book artists. However, I am telling you this because I am the reader of this comic book. That is, I'm telling you this in the READER'S PERSPECTIVE.
Well, then, I guess this is the end of my suggestions.
Anyways, I like the more older version of Major Monogram. XD
And the Thomas's watch is a shield .w.
I said that because I thought it can make your cartoon more interesting.(I didn't mean that your comic is bad I put the word more in order to talk in the sense of relativity. Trust me) Besides, I didn't said change this page but I'm looking forward your improvements on the NEXT PAGES OF THE COMIC.
Well, sorry if made you confused. I was just saying that there should be constant flow and connection BETWEEN THE PAGES not just IN THE PAGE. Like, the plot flows pg.1 to pg.2 instead of pg.1 plot flows~~~~ HALT! next, pg.2 plot flows~~~~ kind of thing.
If that was your intention, well, go ahead. I will not bother about this page again.
Thanks for reading my comments.
Alright.