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Renata in color

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*sigh*

Esto es todo lo que pude obtener .___.
Lo siento, Ash, no pude usar bien la luz! D:
Gracias por todos tus consejos!! ;w; :hug:

Un regalo/tarea para Ely, Mel y Ash! >w<
Tengo que admitirlo, es divertido pintar en pc XDDDDDDDDD

Espero les guste este fatídico intento! ;w;

Renata © *Angelus19 (me .w.)

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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I've gotta say, this drawing is pretty cool. The coloring is nice. The shading is well done. Overall, nice friggin' work!

BUT!

As good as this drawing is... It's not without flaws!

-I can't quite figure out her expression is. Is she smiling awkwardly? Is she sad? Scared? Sheepish? I can't get it for the life of me.

-She has a mouse nose. Most people add a shade in the middle of the face to simulate a nose. You OUTLINED this shading. Thus giving her the appearance of having an animal-like nose.

-Her head is too big. Might I suggest shrinking it just a tiny bit?

Well done amigo(ga). This is so far one of the better drawings I've critiqued. It certainly made me forget about a rather... disturbing image I critiqued earlier. (You don't wanna know. But... let's just say, you'll never want to touch Donkey Kong Country again...) Well, enough of MY venting. Keep up ze good work mon ami!